Problem-Solution Essay Sample on Global Warming

Read the problem-solution essay sample on Global Warming and then state how far it matches the outline below by identifying and underlining the outline items on the essay sheet.

Introduction:

Topic sentence.

There are various avenues through which corrupt practices have been propagated. This includes corrupt face-to-face deals, through the mobile texts, through the banks and currently, in the social media.

Background info on the problem: Definition / causes and effects

Social media refers to a collection of communication channels which are online in nature; these channels are dedicated to ensuring society based interaction, input, collaboration, and content sharing. The causes of social media corruption are to prevent the publication of materials that are deemed to be damaging to the people opposing the publications.

A thesis statement addressing the solutions that the essay examines.

The solutions to the social media corruption in Kenya have been insufficient as they have failed to minimize the vice. Specifically, various solutions were implemented with no much success until the most recent one was discovered and fully incorporated into the Kenyan system

Evaluation Paragraph(s):

A topic sentence.

Cases of social media fraud went uncontrolled for many years since the advent of the digital revolution as the state was not allowed to access the social media accounts of the users.

Previous solution (s).

Background information on the previous solution (s).

The first attempt that the Kenyan state used to solve the problem of epidemic social media corruption was via the passage of the adoption of various media laws that prohibited any posting of information that threatens other peoples lives

Evidence from one of your sources (a quote, summary, or paraphrase) and provide citations.

The grunt norm of the Kenyan society- which is the Kenyan constitution 2010, gives the social media users the freedom of expression.

Another different evidence from your sources (a quote, summary, or paraphrase) and provide citations.

These laws include; Kenya Information and Communications Act (KICA) 2013, and the Penal Code

Inferences.

The laws restricted the content that could be posted as improper content could be heavily punished by fines or jail terms

The pros of the above mentioned solution(s).

Evidence from one of your sources (a quote, summary, or paraphrase) and provide citations.

Corruption cases involving the social media reduced drastically as individuals were now free to express themselves.

Another evidence from your sources (a quote, summary, or paraphrase) and provide citations.

The rate of corruption epidemic through the social media dropped as the laws were harsh on those who tried to use social media to propagate their corruption practices.

Inferences.

Therefore, the passage of the various legislations significantly led to a reduction in social media corruption cases as it scared those who had such intentions.

The cons of the above mentioned solution(s).

Evidence from one of your sources (a quote, summary, or paraphrase) and provide citations.

Through the use of pseudonyms they still offered bribes to the social media users, which was tough for the government to control

Another evidence from your sources (a quote, summary, or paraphrase) and provide citations.

When cases of corruption went to the courts, some of the provisions of the social media laws were overruled by the provisions of the constitution on the right to privacy and the freedom of expression.

Inferences.

These cons make the solution of legislation ineffective and outdated as the social media propagators of corruption have devised other methods of continuing with their vices.

A concluding sentence that draws a general inference.

The previous solutions used to fight social media corruption have failed to live up to the expectations.

Persuasion Paragraph(s):

A topic sentence that paves the way for introducing the new solution.

The application of a collective monitoring and reporting on the content of social media users will effectively minimize the incidences of social media corruption.

Introduction of the best solution.

the state should collaborate with international partners as well as the administrators of the social media applications so that they can monitor the activities of the users and single out those who use the social sites with an intention of making and furthering any corrupt practices.

Pathos, Ethos or Logos to convince the reader of the pros of the solution. (Why is each pro proved to be efficient?).

The citizenry will be the utmost benefits as the degree of transparency and integrity will increase.

Pathos, Ethos or Logos to prove to convince the reader that the cons of the new solution could be avoided. (how could each con be avoided)

This solution is not expensive as the expenses of its implementation will be cushioned by the various stakeholders in a shared manner.

Refute any opposing arguments you may anticipate.

The right to privacy is not an absolute right. When the financial well-being of the state is at stake, some rights can be suspended so that the majority of the citizens do not continue to be poor while people propagate corruption activities in the social media.

A concluding sentence that draws a general inference.

In the end, corruption practices in the social media will be a thing of the past when this solution is implemented

A concluding Paragraph:

Restatement of your thesis.

Kenya is having increased cases of social media corruption due to the increase in the number of social media users since the advent of the digital revolution. The solutions to the social media corruption in Kenya have been insufficient as they have failed to eradicate the vice

Summing up of discussion points.

The legislations passed are inefficient as they have been unable to match the current technological advancements. However, the implementation of a collaborative monitoring and reporting of incidences of corruption in the social media will help minimize the vice.

Call for action.

Corruption is eroding the morals of the society and contributing to the poverty of the developing nation. Therefore, if the proposed solution is not implemented more damning consequences will be felt by the current and future generations.